I am on a train and me and my mom are going to Wyoming for my uncles wedding. When we get on the train we see the conductor is trying to welcome us onto the train in a nice way but the way he looks at me make me feel insecure... This was a fun prompt to work with since I love trains. I could have added a few more details to better paint the picture of what it was like to ride a train. It would have been helpful to add more detail about how the girl remembered being on the train in forty eight. This would be a good one to rewrite and add some of the history about the train crash as well. I will probably do that in the future. What do you think?
Here is a Link to the Story
https://goo.gl/FqC45w
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