Twenty-first Day

You were walking home from school and a bunch of bullies started chasing you and you ran into the woods and got lost.



I started this story as an "out smart the bullies" story. I added back story so that you would understand what the main character was going through and then started to tell what happened on a specific day. I liked the idea of the main character going into the woods and being followed by the bullies. Then turning the tables on them and escaping. I wanted to show how the main character could use his brain to get through the situation and get a certain level of revenge without really doing anything. The ending may be to short for some, but I wanted to leave open the various possibilities of what happened to the bully. Was it believable? I don't know. It's always the wish of a victim to get back at his or her harasser and it is the kind of story that gives them hope. What do you think?

Here is a Link to the Story

https://goo.gl/LeB5bq