Fourteenth Day

It was just 27 years ago when I lost my beloved one. But I just remember it just like it was yesterday. See, I lost her to a car accident. Our relationship was rough and we fought, but it was my fault. It was my fault that I was mad and swerved the CAR!......sigh… I wish I had the power to go back, so I would appreciate her more. Her name was Evalynn, 23 year old Evalynn. I met her through Med School. Yes I was training to be a neurosurgeon, hard-working, too. But, I wasn’t giving my hardest-work to Evalynn. I would try my hardest to be peaceful, but I was the one that would start the fight. Now before going on into the story. I would like you to get to know me. My name is Ashton, I’m 50 years old, I'm a successful neurosurgeon, I like to read books and write poems. And that’s how Evalynn liked me. She wore these owl glasses that were always cute for her, she read books and did creative writing, and she liked tea better than coffee. And that’s how I liked her, too. Like I said we met in Med school. She was training to be a pharmacist and me, a neurosurgeon. But, the car swerved liked our relationship…… then it ended. Now I am left alone and deciding what to do with my life.






This prompt had a difficult subject to deal with so I concentrated on the positive aspects of the relationship instead of the sad way it ended. I believed from the prompt that Ashton did love Evalynn and they had some good time before their troubles. The story is basic "lost love" plot that you would see on any Hallmark Movie, only in the movie there would be a happy ending. The prompt gave me the characters, setting and plot, so all I needed to do was to flesh it out a bit. What do you think?

Here is a Link to the Story

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