Eighth Day

The writing prompt for today is:

I never truly liked reading until the strangest thing happened. My mom, sister and I had to go to the library to get a book for my little sister for her book report. I was scanning the books, just because, when I saw this one book. It had gold around the ridges and the pages were as fine as silk. I opened the book and I started flipping through the pages when all of a sudden I look up, and I’m no longer in the library.  

As I looked at this prompt I thought how everyone that reads should hope to get lost in the pages of a book. To be able to imagine and see the people and setting in their minds eye is a great experience. But the more I looked at it I thought it might be fun to literally get lost in the pages of the book. So I went from that perspective and wrote the story. As some of the comments noted, I had a hard time making it clear what was happening. It might have been better to set the scene better with more explanation. Anyway, I liked they premise and I think after a few revisions I think it would be a good story. What do you think?

Here is a link to the story

https://goo.gl/jZNVvf